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牵手

2010/05/04
外甥(臣),13岁,初二,@苏州,QQ昵称居然叫“傷❤蛋壳”。

他签名档是一首诗:
《牵手》

牵过的手,
掌心的温度,
还缠绕我的左右……
我觉得改成下面的更有诗意:
《牵手》

牵过的玉手,
掌心的温度,
缠绕在你发际,
萦绕在我心头。
哎,好久没写诗了~
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One Comment leave one →
  1. 乌托邦 permalink
    2010/05/05 18:49

    一眼就能看出年龄差距

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